startling banals

river
is it only
your surface
that flows?

beautiful verse!
and thanks for your comments on 'koii raaz-e-dil!

thank you ajay.

achha likha hai..kaise suza tuze?

aise hi dopahar ko nadi kinaare ghaas pe letey hue, ped ki chaav mein. fresh thandi hawa, paani ki khushbu, lehren, sailboats

nice pieces
i would say
not bad !

thank you :)

the surface, flowing, always remains motionless in an unbroken incessant mutation.
all the images that reflect their essence in the river , remain motionless and immutable...while all flows and nothig move.

your words are full of kindness, anish.
ivana.