startling banals

15 January 2009

the sound of running water travelling through the plumbing
revealed the presence of other insomniacs in the building

4 Comments:

water running down also dumps the night back to the earth!
Blogger Junuka, at 16.1.09  
Good one! isnt it good to know! :)

I think I shud start writing in nonsense verse like you than the nonsense prose I write. atleast this is more tight!
Blogger b v n, at 19.1.09  
:) nice
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