startling banals

a small black bulldog
sniffs at my lunch bag
while passing by

while passing by
he sniffs at your lunch bag
small black bulldog.

lunch bag and you
small & black
bulldog & you
sniff & pass
wow..can you share some of that action the lunch bag exudes?

Draws the picture.

@ Anon: yes yours is a more classic haiku style :)

@ mubin: lunch bag had fish! and the dog never gets to eat it probably hehe

@ Anil: thank you anil! i really enjoy reading your blog. great going man!

hey fish?...
what style?

fish. mere roomie TD ke ishhstyle mein..
pyaaz, capsicum, tomato with black pepper ka tadka! mast hua tha yaar