startling banals

29 June 2009

an ocean
with waters so dark
we forget it's there
while rhythmic
we row our boat
under this star-crammed sky

4 Comments:

what do we forget? The water, the darkness or all those stars that stare at us...
entwinded as one..
Anonymous mubin, at 30.6.09  
the fact that there is a huge tremendous ocean around the tiny boat
Blogger anish, at 30.6.09  
Guess I over looked that one huh?

I do like reading ur blog...gives me a well deserved break from my hectic schedule!
Anonymous mubin, at 1.7.09  
i am happy if gives some peace :)
thank you!
Blogger anish, at 2.7.09  

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